Some people say that science study should be mandatory in schools, others argue that it is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Science is the study of the nature and behaviour of natural things. Here it is saying that in schools, it is compulsory to learn science while others oppose it. In this essay, we discuss both the sides and at the end, I will give my opinion.
On one side, science is the backbone of modern technologies. The craftworks of science can be seen in every walks of our life. Not only the equipments that are the products of innovation, but also it paves open to a wide range of opportunities beneath and above the earth. Basic knowledge about nature and surrounding are vital. Though the education is given to all, there are people who do things in an unnatural way. For an optimum example, in a developing country like India, it's citizens are acting weird by throwing waste in rivers and in abandoned land and so on. This act of arrogance can be completely eradicate by giving them proper education. Hence once can make a better environment to live on.
On the other hand, science is not the only subject in the world. Apart from science, there are other streams like Maths, History, Language and so on. It is indispensible not to avoid all other subjects as they also have to be learned by the students. Moreover, every individual has their own likes ad dislikes. One should allow students to choose the subject they need to learn. As an impeccable example, a friend of mine who was interested in nature and chose Botany as his main subjects and later on, he became a horticulture officer. While another person because a software engineer. Preferably they chose their own career by passion. As a result, they achieved their goal in a resplendent way.
To sum up, even though there are different opinions on the importance of science in classrooms. I personally believe that science should be mandatory for students in their study stages of classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76160990712 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64812500028 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3584976027 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9090909091 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6818181818 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226071363093 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565915698345 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621922905614 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156872119784 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863077198673 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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