To what extent has the Internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience?
With the invention of the Internet several decades ago, human beings have experienced the widespread impact of it, mostly positive with a few negative signs as well.
There are numerous benefits connected with the appearance of the Internet. Firstly, the Internet has played an obvious role as a connector for the whole mankind, which means that people can use it to get in touch with their relatives and friends by messaging or video-calling each other through some applications on the Internet without paying huge amounts of money in comparison to the phone use in the past. Secondly, the development of the Internet has led to the appearance of new services and technology based on the Internet, which has made our life much easier. For example, people had to go out to buy a pizza in the past, but now they can conveniently choose and order their favourite pizza using an application on their smart phones. It is clear that the Internet has also brought countless numbers of services and developments for our society as we cannot list all in this writing.
However, the Internet has come to human civilization without no drawbacks. The first negative influence is on human physical health because when amounts of time one using the Internet increase, time for physical activities will decrease. Another demerit of the Internet is that it has enabled new types of crime to exist: cyber-crime or digital crime. If there was no the Internet, these kinds of crime would not have appeared. Individuals and governments are spending a lot of money and time tackling these kinds of crime.
To sum up, it is no doubt that humans have been beneficial greatly due to the existence of the Internet. Nevertheless, the Internet has shown some problematic issues as well. It is recommended that individuals and governments should co-operate closely to decrease the negative impact of this glamorous invention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0664556962 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79805538259 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4892196264 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108495200897 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390481494799 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259263035472 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561033081054 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326827302795 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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