Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is changing in a very rapid rhythm compared to the past, even in the behavior and way of thinking of young people. There is a debate on whether the youngsters today have a significant influence on their societies or not. In my opinion, I believe that young people today have voice and effect on the world and in this essay I will demonstrate my reasons for that support.
To begin with, youngsters today are more knowledgeable and experienced in different aspects of life than in the past. They learn at school and universities how to think rationally, be leaders and make informed decisions according to evidence. In politics for example, they are able to make decisions concerning their country's future and to assert their vision for its prosperity. They are now highly qualified to interpret events happening in the society around them and even in the world as a whole. They are able to defend their rights in gaining freedom, democracy and social equity. All these abilities were acquired through learning from the past and observing the points of weakness and strength of the previous generations.
Secondly, with the help of the technological development and the use of the internet, young people are able to communicate with other people in the world and discover different points of view. Moreover, they managed to know what is happening far from them and take lessons from it as well as interacting with it. These factors helped in building strong background and represented a platform to start their influence.
Lastly, youth learned early the meaning of responsibility because of the current circumstances and world events that force them to mature and root for their opinions. For instance, we can see now young people presiding leading positions in their universities and colleges through which they can transfer their opinions to the society. From my personal experience, when I was in the university, I was the president of the students' union and I could participate in changing many decisions taken by our teachers and administrators for the collective usefulness.
In the summary, I posit that young people have today significant roles and effects on the important decisions of their societies. This is because of the enhanced education they receive, the internet and being inherently responsible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13684210526 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88124126837 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.273174919 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.823529412 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170690311741 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558077977581 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624443532079 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106941341443 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529553295663 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.