Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
In contemporary society, there has been a growing tendency of commercial filming and people are overwhelming because it appears everywhere from the television to the internet. There are both merits and liabilities to this as will be explained, though overall, placing both variant facts on the scale, it is incontrovertible that the positive aspects outweigh the problems. This essay will first demonstrate the significant impact on the growth of the economy as the biggest advantage of this, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, namely people are manipulated by it, is not valid.
What further amplifies fortifies the dominance ascendancy of the utility over the hindrance is that the development of advertisements brings positive elements to the economy. To begin with, the larger the industry get the more people are provided with job opportunities stem from positions for people to design logos for companies to content creators that plan advertising campaigns. Hence, the unemployment rates will decrease and in return, creating a higher living standard. In addition, advertising helps companies to boost their sales. This borne by the fact that advertisements inform people about the products and thus, reaching potential customers for businesses. According to the PEW Center, Pepsi increased 45% profit because of their advertisement successfully attracted customers with colorful images.
In the midst of pre-imminence of the disadvantage, the subject matter is not at all bereft to advantage foremost of which is advertising manipulating people in their favor. The rationale behind this is that they use celebrities to promote brand images and people argue that they are trying to associate certain brands with higher status, therefore, people are persuaded that buying a product would make them feel happier. However, there is no evidence to support this view. The Times recently reported that a vast majority want to purchase high brand products because they simply look good.
In gist, having considered both advantages and disadvantages, it is clear that there are more positive points to this development and that it benefits the economy by creating job opportunities and helps companies to boost their sales.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49855907781 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01396561666 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57060518732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.375567771 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.285714286 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123410667835 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413373171455 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484531178566 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811662556086 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650097897004 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.