Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?.
In thesedays garbage has become the major problem because of the huge amount of rubbish production, which is made by people. Government may decrease this. In this essay we will consider why is this occurs? and what can be done to fight with this problem.
Firstly, The inhert of this problem is plastic. It is a product which is use as a container, water bottle and mostly as a carry bag. plastic container is basically use to carry food and water bottle for carry water. However, carry bags can be use for these proposes as well. Plastic container or bottle can easily recycle But carry bag would not. For instantiate, container has atleast four to five layers of plastic and carry bag has only single layer it means that carry can not be recycle again and again. Moreover, containers or bottle can restore, there is also a drawback of it. For example, If we recycle a container or a bottle it only recoverd into a carry bag and there is no other options.
On the other hand, To control this problem there is only one way which totally ban on plastic. Plastic is much more dagerous then it's looks like. In general, this material can causes cancer to human. For example, if we heat water in steel bowl and pour it into the plastic water bottle and warm water will boil the bottle a little, we do not even know that we are drinking water including plastic.
In conclusion, we can clearly see that plastic is main thing which makes infinity garbage. However, there are a lot of benefits of plastic, easy to carry, light weight and costs less as compare to clothes bagg or steel bottle but instead of our lifes has more values, so the better option is government should take a step so it can be distinct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51935483871 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29402018649 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.3246117397 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8333333333 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152773621679 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566094674855 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391276661211 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112836174137 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628838792788 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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