Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
All people should stop consuming meat, otherwise, their health is at a big risk. I completely agree with this point of view. Althouse, it still sounds very revolutionary for some of us, each year more and more people become vegetarian or even vegan.
This is not a theory any more that is meat could damage our body. Lead universities performed scientific researches that have proven that meat eaters live shorter and suffer more from heart attacks, obesity, and other diseases. For instance, my coworker who was suffering from obesity went to a healthy lifestyle workshop. After the workshop he stopped consuming meat, this boosted his energy and he was able to exercise more and lost his weight and balanced his blood test and his lifestyle. Finally, he became much happier person than he used to be.
Moreover, the quality of affordable meat source is deteriorated and became unhealthy for our diet. Processed meat is cheaper but it actually could contain a lot of unhealthy elements like processed fats and others. No wonder(,?) that the least ingredient that contains processed meat will be the meat itself. In many cases, these cheap products are most reachable to most of the population. Sadly these products are immediate choices for millions because of their availability and price. People are still consuming fast food and harm their health. Whereas, a vegetarian source of food is a budget and a better source for plenty of nutrition that our body needs.
In conclusion, a healthy diet determines our wellbeing. We should encourage people to consume more vegetables. Perhaps, some regulations should be done according to how to decrease the consumption of processed meat. Or even the health system should advertise a meatless diet in a case(synonyms: on condition?) to have less ill people that should be cured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, if, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70132477787 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4059061387 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138698863129 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399896658603 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314465198834 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917274971215 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424338182831 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.