Some people think that live in a house is better than live in an apartment but others opinion say that there is more advantages live in an apartment

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ouse is better than live in an apartment ,but others opinion say that there is mor...
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Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are more advantages'?
Suggestion: there are more advantages
... apartment ,but others opinion say that there is more advantages live in an apartment. Some people pref...
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Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
.... Some people prefer to live in a house,there maybe have some causes.One of them is,i...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...in a house,there maybe have some causes.One of them is,if man do not get used to li...
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Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...re maybe have some causes.One of them is,if man do not get used to live in an apart...
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Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
... do not get used to live in an apartment,when man soon childhood get used to live in ...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , where
...oon childhood get used to live in ahouse,where weather is fresh,where is many trees,w...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , where
...to live in ahouse,where weather is fresh,where is many trees,where man can breathe ea...
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...use,where weather is fresh,where is many trees,where man can breathe easily.When ...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , where
...re weather is fresh,where is many trees,where man can breathe easily.When you live in...
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Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...any trees,where man can breathe easily.When you live in a house,you can feel comfor...
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Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
... breathe easily.When you live in a house,you can feel comfort,tranquility,you can fe...
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Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tranquility
...you live in a house,you can feel comfort,tranquility,you can feel freely yourself.There are ...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ranquility,you can feel freely yourself.There are many housework for woman and men eq...
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Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun housework seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much housework', 'a good deal of housework'.
Suggestion: much housework; a good deal of housework
...,you can feel freely yourself.There are many housework for woman and men equally,when you work...
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Line 2, column 390, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...many housework for woman and men equally,when you work you do not be fat.The sun shin...
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Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: The
...equally,when you work you do not be fat.The sun shines every day in the village,if ...
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Line 2, column 462, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
....The sun shines every day in the village,if your house in the village it is very go...
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Line 2, column 507, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...our house in the village it is very good,because when you live in the village house you ...
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Line 2, column 578, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be never
...illage house you can get suntan and you never be ill. Others feel that there are more a...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...ore advantages to living in an apartment,because soon childhood they live in an apartmen...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...at live there is better than in a house.There are more advantages and comforts in an ...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
... advantages and comforts in an apartment,because in the city thre is more modern technol...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Who
...the city thre is more modern technology.Who love live in a small house they are liv...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an apartment' or simply 'apartments'?
Suggestion: an apartment; apartments
... live in a small house they are live in an apartments,because there are in each houses have g...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...all house they are live in an apartments,because there are in each houses have garden or...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
... in each houses have garden or big field,in a one word we can say that who work,who...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , who
...d,in a one word we can say that who work,who is very busy,whose do not interest a ho...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whose
...e can say that who work,who is very busy,whose do not interest a house where he lives ...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , they
... house where he lives and who live alone,they can live in an apartment. In my opinio...
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Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...ouse is better than live in an apartment,because I love houses where have big field and ...
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Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'fielded'.
Suggestion: fielded
...nt,because I love houses where have big field and a house with many rooms.When I live...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...e big field and a house with many rooms.When I live in an apartment,I feel that I am...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , I
...h many rooms.When I live in an apartment,I feel that I am in small house where onl...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: I
...am in small house where only technology.I do not feel comfort in an apartment.I t...
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Suggestion: I
...y.I do not feel comfort in an apartment.I think that who love live in an house,th...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...apartment.I think that who love live in an house,they live there,who want to live ...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...t.I think that who love live in an house,they live there,who want to live in an apart...
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Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...ho love live in an house,they live there,who want to live in an apartment ,they shou...
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Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e there,who want to live in an apartment ,they should live in an apartment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, i feel, i think, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 7.30460921844 342% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60200668896 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25028554183 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408026755853 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.10420841683 523% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.95158282 49.4020404114 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 344.0 106.682146367 322% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.75 20.7667163134 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.596727881559 0.244688304435 244% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.530390405246 0.084324248473 629% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.263639487795 0.0667982634062 395% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.530390405246 0.151304729494 351% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.263639487795 0.056905535591 463% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.6 13.0946893788 287% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.83 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.