The disadvantages of tourism in less developed countries is as great as the advantages. What is your opinion?
The impact of tourism in less developed countries which frequently generated a great deal of heated debate, has now become even more controversial. While some people believe that the drawbacks of tourism in undeveloped countries is as same as the advantages, other claims that otherwise. This essay will elaborate both sides of the debate, thus lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why the drawbacks are the same as the advantages in tourist industry for undeveloped nations, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that when the nations have developed in the tourist industries that related to many society problems specially crime. For example, a study conducted by Melbourne university showed that 40 percent of foreign travelers in some of African countries have lost their wallets during holiday time on Africa. Furthermore, it can have significant impact on environmental systems in undeveloped nations.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that the advantages of tourism is better than its drawbacks. It is largely attributed that fact that those countries can gain a lot of benefit from the travel industries that will contribute the large amount of money to GDP in those nations. For instance, a survey at Latrobe university proved that 40 percent of national GDP in Asian undeveloped countries have gained from travel industry.
In conclusion, while there are many strong arguments on both sides of the debate, I strongly believe that the advantages of tourism in undeveloped nations outweigh the drawbacks. I would strongly recommend that it is important for those countries to encourage more in tourist industry.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30258302583 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89534131335 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.924772745 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172201318597 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660963446912 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636248112224 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109620622854 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537967886791 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30258302583 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89534131335 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.924772745 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172201318597 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660963446912 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636248112224 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109620622854 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537967886791 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.