Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education from primary school to tertiary education should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Education ought to be readily available to everyone no matter their social status. Some people believe that all stages of acquiring education must be without cost. In my opinion, u disagree that going to school at any level should be without charge as it may not benefit individuals and the society.
A good reason why free education at all points is not favourable is that it would bring about the problem of lack of interest. For instance, studies have shown that students tend to take school more seriously when they have to pay for it. Additionally, as people, we haven an inclination to disregard things we obtain for free. As a result of this, there will be an increased drop rate or graduation of people who are not ready for workforce or the next stage. Consequently, if more people are able to earn a degree then the value of the school degree decreases.Furthermore, issues of overcrowding may also arise.
Another point to consider is that if education at all steps is free, maintenance problems will begin to come up. For example, most educational institutions generate a large proportion of their income, however, when going to school becomes cost free funds to pay staff and maintain buildings may no longer be readily available. Hence, government may be forced to increase tax rate and take aids from other important sectors and this would hurt the economy. Therefore, free education for all no matter the stage should not be contemplated.
In conclusion, education without charge would devalue education itself and bring about difficulties which are unfavourable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...he value of the school degree decreases.Furthermore, issues of overcrowding may also arise....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03802281369 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93399168193 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9552545762 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350137565742 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130932689942 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890548974757 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224146359301 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875972897314 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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