When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. You should write at least 250 words.
Considering the salary is prominent while selecting a job. However, I believe that although getting a good salary has many benefits, other considerations are also vital for a person.
Good salary has some benefits in certain ways. Firstly, the fulfilment of daily needs such as food, paying bills, and health care are only possible with the help of large sums of money. Secondly, people who get good salary can financially support their family members as well as motivate their children to get a good education for their better carrier. To cite an example, the PAWAN MUNJAL, who is the CEO in the hero Moto corporation, earns near about 43 CRORE annually.
Although getting good salary has some positive effects, yet the role of other important things cannot be overlooked such as peaceful working environment and motivation, which seems to have an immense significance for the workers to work with the full of efficiency, may lead to overcoming the difficulties as well as Self-satisfaction. Another major factor is the reputation of the company or workplace because having left a company the given experience, which matters a lot for an employee, should be from the certified organization for finding the work somewhere else.
In conclusion, it is clear that high wage certainly affects the people’s lives, while the other prominent factors are also valuable so that people should have a similar choice towards high salary and other effective things for the smooth running of their entire life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 456, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'CRORE' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'crores'.
Suggestion: Crores
...o Moto corporation, earns near about 43 CRORE annually. Although getting good salary...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14693877551 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80323487794 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1589305405 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.111111111 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7777777778 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872867941314 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393062640689 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257485698103 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05832304742 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264467557869 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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