In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby.
To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
Shopping is the activity in which customers buy goods and household things from a variety of shops. In older days people used to purchase things on a daily basis; however, it is believed by many people that it becomes a hobby these days. I agree with the statement that this phenomenon has a positive impact on the people but its negative impact cannot be overlooked.
Beyond any qualm, there are several compelling reasons why shopping has become a hobby because first and foremost, it is not only to spend money on food and household things but to be aware about the products, quality, different brands and price in details. People love shopping as it refreshes their mind and makes them forget the worries for that time. For example, usually students go on shopping after finishing their exams to reduce their stress for the results. Therefore, younger generations prefer and get attracted for shopping and make it their hobby.
Further reinforcing, there are myriad logical thoughts to support the same view. It is true that people nowadays have a busy schedule. They could not able to spend time with their loved ones. So, people plan their shopping with friends and family to spend quality time with them. Nowadays, shopping malls are the places where everyone can enjoy their day. For example, malls has food stations, theaters and couple can also leave their kids at play station to engage them for some time and they can go for shopping. Thus, It is a convenient and safest place for people to shop.
On the contrary, People tend to spend money on the products which attracts them and are not at all useful for them because there are a number of varieties in products and comfort levels in shopping malls. Sometimes youngsters spend a lot of time and money in shopping with friends whereas they can utilize this time in sports or studies which would be beneficial for them for future. Moreover, spending huge amount for things will make them come under debts. For instance, Companies provide their products to customers on zero balance money payment and this can lead youngsters towards crimes because they are not having sufficient money to pay. Therefore, shopping is sometimes not good for the people who are getting addicted to it and want the things at any cost.
All in all, shopping could be a great habit or hobby of an individual as it refreshes their mind and makes them forget about their problems and anxieties but, people should not be addicted with their hobby as it converts or creates many consequences for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 448.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88392857143 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37617032792 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495535714286 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2043989035 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4545454545 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126716575753 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463738269513 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383828199266 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761864429206 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449201341991 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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