Is it better to be unemployed in jobs rather than to be employed in jobs even if they don't feel happy or enjoy. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the issue of job satisfaction has ratcheted up public interest, with many people believe that leaving the unsuitable job is more favorable than adhering to the job that employees can hardly relate. I completely disagree with the given statement.
On the one hand, there are compelling reasons why workers should resign if they are not cut out for the job.
The first point worthy of note is that working in an inappropriate working place and doing unstimulating tasks can adversely affect ppl's working attitude. An explanation for this is devoting their time to jobs that people loathe would demotivate workers, making them loathe the job more. In the long term, their degree of productivity would reduce accordingly; therefore, leading to below-standard working quality. Besides, keeping an inappropriate job may prevent workers from opportunities that suitable offers. For example, working a nine to five job forces employees to stay at the office most of the day, making it impossible for them to seek a new career that suits them.
On the other hand, it stands to reason that being unemployed brings several drawbacks in its wake. The first point worth noticing is that it may create a financial burden for those who experience unemployment. To be more specific, adults need a salary to meet the basic needs of life. Without monthly wages, one cannot cover the cost of electric bills or staples to sustain life. Another point endorsing this view is that joining the ranks of the unemployed makes ppl feel insecure. This is because they cannot have a stable job while many of their colleagues might have settled down.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the idea of quitting the unsatisfying job is rather absurd.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'makes'' or 'make's'?
Suggestion: makes'; make's
...hat joining the ranks of the unemployed makes ppl feel insecure. This is because they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, first, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0276816609 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71478371992 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4996392479 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22136870971 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645273727345 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447121782129 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118424411028 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256789091578 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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