Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this 21st century, art plays a vital role because it represents the culture and customs of the nation. Some individuals opine that, authorities ought to expend financial fund upon public services instead of spending on arts : painting; music, it is misspend of money. I partially agree with this argument.
On one hand, some people have art as an occupation : some are musician; painter; singer and many more, it is the only mean for them, which assists to earn money. If governments should stop to pay out upon arts, it not only affects the income of an artist but also they get discouragement from work and lose their creativity, while, they stop to do it. For an instance, one of the european countries - Malta, where author stoped to expand money upon arts, accordingly, all artist got unemployed, some stop creativity and some started to present their talent on streets for getting money in order to fulfill the needs of their family also the rate of unemployment was incline, decline the number of an artist as well.
On the other hand, It is great for the authorities to spend financial funds on public services : Medical - provide better health care in affordable cost; Transportation - good infrastructure of road, street lights, frequent roots of buses and trains; Education - the foundation of any clever country is its education system, free education to children, which helps to obtain a good job in near future also decrease the unemployment and uneducated citizens ratio of the nation, these are the elements, which are extremely benevolent for the country. For an example in most of the nations, the levies of transport; medical items : GST tax, vehicle tax and so on, which are inclining the income for the nation.
To conclude, it is better for the authors to expend financial funds upon both arts and citizens facilities, which assist to raise the economy of the country and decrease the unemployment and uneducated human beings ratio as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'misspent'.
Suggestion: misspent
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Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...ecrease the unemployment and uneducated citizens ratio of the nation, these are the elem...
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Suggestion: beings'; being's
...e the unemployment and uneducated human beings ratio as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99695121951 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71165906481 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.736641891 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.111111111 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4444444444 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185052182781 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919282678666 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708675871535 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116414179418 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105350241477 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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