Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions to solve this issue?
Nowdays, many people animals species are becoming extinct. Unlike previous extinct triggeret by such ordinary events. But extinct due to human activities on land and sea.
There are several reason for this topic an also a number of strategies to encourange to many people for preventing extinction. In a way preventing enviromental damage. Many people damaging the enviroment for self interest.
For example on the land many people cutting down stress, clearing the land and other things. For example in the sea such as fish farmer do trawl, bomb in the sea and other things until fish larvae get caught or killed. So the life chain of fish is severed.
The other reason is overhunting. MAny animals be hunted cause meats, skin, hair and best part of body animals for sale.
For example is overhunting to rhinoceros to get the horn, elephant to get the ivory and other things.
As result, it make many animals species are becoming extinct and the chain of animals is severe.
All in all, about extinct so important for many people khow about the importance of protecting the environment for future. In away do sustainable culture for fish and deacrase for overfishing or overhunting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...activities on land and sea. There are several reason for this topic an also a number of stra...
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Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ivory and other things. As result, it make many animals species are becoming extin...
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Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...other things. As result, it make many animals species are becoming extinct and the ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97989949749 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60913891323 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547738693467 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5042148856 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0666666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2666666667 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275365736628 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114272243954 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136422557864 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156036593728 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144398448308 0.056905535591 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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