The table shows information about the percentage of consumer spending

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The table shows information about the percentage of consumer spending

The table shows information about the percentage of consumer spending on different in five countries in 2002 , namely Ireland, italy, spain, sweden and turkey.
Food , drinks ,and tabacco was in the most important items on consumer speding in all five countries . in Ireland and turkey the rate of food , drinks, tobacco was near 30% constuting 28,91% and 32,14% respectively, while the percentage of these other countries is under 20%.
Clothing and footwear were the second important items in 5 countries. In Italy , they got 9% , but in Sweden, it just was under 5,4%. In the other countries have a similar percentage approximate until 6% to 7%.
The last of group different items consumer expenditure is leisure and education. The figure of it was just under 5%. It seems was not popular and unimportant than food , drinks , and tobacco or Clothing and footwear.
In conclusion it can be said that 2002 , food, drinks, and tobacco were the most important of consumer spending in 5 countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05487804878 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76410600389 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.106690453 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240843960408 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875153136463 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146439889935 0.0843802449381 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155205241293 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180092788046 0.0819641961636 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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