It's important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviours to children?
Give reasons and relevant example from your knowledge and experiences.
Many people believe that children should be taught about sense of judgment at a very young age. I totally agree with this standpoint and think that imposing suitable punishment is crucial to expect good behaviors from children.
The first early years of a child's life is the most important phase to be educated about the distinction between wright and wrong. Those years is their developmental stage of emotions and awareness. Therefore, the outside world is so tempting that children instinctively explore the world by all means. They can be easily affected by the surroundings such as: relatives, media and friends and have a tendency to imitate what could be seen or heard around them. As a result, wrongdoing is unavoidable so immediate discipline is a must for no future repetition.
Parents and teachers should find appropriate punishment that is not detrimental mentally and physically to children. Hence, scolding and abusing must be excluded as they have negative effects in term of psychological aspect and create lying habit to avoid physical harm. For instance, when facing children fighting or aggressive behaviors, adults should tackle problems with patience and pedagogical skills. Two-way communication is needed to for children to learn about violence misuse and harmonize relationships among students. Finally, mandatory class rules have to be made in order to guarantee children's adaptation to a methodical environment.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that discipline is essential to have young children aware of basic moral standards and should be focused more in the field of children education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41960784314 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95827708412 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6492314079 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267660816856 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799653940933 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536655020095 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142700674168 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291587241017 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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