Some people believe that big cities should make the transportation system free. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
it is widely believed by a group of people that the governments of the big cities should afford the public transportation fees in order to be free of charge for the public.
This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. Firstly the essay will demonstrate the benefits of making the transportation system free of charge, which are stronger than the drawbacks of it. followed by the analysis of how weak is the effect of the disadvantages.
One of the main reasons for making transportation free is, reducing the burden of the monthly expenses on people which includes transportation fees. If someone has a car, he will prefer using public transportation rather than his car to save the car fuel money, along with that this will reduce the crowd in the streets. In other words, If a family has two cars, they will not use these cars yet public transportation, so the numbers of cars will be reduced in the streets which significantly affects the traffic. It is obvious that the advantages impact positively on the public than the government that is why the advantages are stronger than the drawbacks.
On the other hand, governments will be impacted by the drawbacks because they will spend more money on the transportation aspect without getting any income. To illustrate, governments will afford all the expenses of transportation like gas, drivers' salaries, and maintenance. The other reason is, the pressure on public transportation will be increased hugely since it will be favored by most of the people and that will influence the maintenance expenses of transportation. Conversely, the drawbacks do not impact the public that is why the drawbacks are weaker than the advantages.
To conclude, Making the transportation free of charge will surely affect both persons and governments, so it is preferred that big cities with strong economy should make it free.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is widely believed by a group of people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, if, so, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08945686901 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04790322898 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476038338658 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.464012518 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246672165457 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962344626757 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927255326071 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176071410887 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853043956202 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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