More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think are the causes of this? Can you suggest some possible solutions?
It is believed, that modern work patterns cause a whole lot of stress. There are a lot of reasons for this but I highlight two primary: overwhelming workload and feeling pressure because of inconvenient conditions. Possible solutions for coping this depend most of employers. Then, reducing work hours and providing more convenient conditions at the workplace could contribute to work-life balance and could help to reduce stress.
#2 causes
Due to rapid changes in technologies, lifestyle, consumption and also due to the growing economy people have more and more tasks at work. By this I mean an increasing workload is linked with rocketed needs, standards of living, spendings. It leads to an enormous amount of work. For example, top management in company set KPI which employees cannot achieve. They just cannot finish work in time, deadlines are postponing again and again. People have to work more than it is needed, especially this tendency is common for Japan and Russia. The second reason for getting stress at workplace is not comfortable conditions and toxic atmosphere among team. To clarify, people do not feel care from employer, have horrible furniture and technical appliances. For instance, an outdated computer declines productivity and rises the level of stress.
#2solutions
What could be done to deal with these issues? First, employers could reduce work hours and encourage people do not work at home and do not stay late at office. As a result, people will spend more time with family and friends, will have more time for relaxation. Secondly, employer should provide comfortable conditions that enable people do their job tasks easier and more efficiently. To exemplify, the technical appliances have to be modern, there should be enough space for accommodation a number of people. Also, it is a good idea to have a massages therapy or corporate psychologist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...eved, that modern work patterns cause a whole lot of stress. There are a lot of reasons f...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the employers') or simply say ''most employers''.
Suggestion: most of the employers; most employers
...ssible solutions for coping this depend most of employers. Then, reducing work hours and providin...
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Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'massages'' or 'massage's'?
Suggestion: massages'; massage's
...ople. Also, it is a good idea to have a massages therapy or corporate psychologist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i mean, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22039473684 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81884479774 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8093952645 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5263157895 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266781281222 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784121424668 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639309689192 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185897784437 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224020433113 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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