Media is more and more paying attention to famous people like sports persons, models and actors, despite the fact they belong to simple families and became successful after years of hard work . Why do you think people take so much interest in others lives? Do you think it is positive thing?
Media had changed our daily life, by increasing interest in famous people. However, they achieved success after putting efforts in order to change theirs situation. There are several reasons why individuals are paying attention towards celebrities, such as, inspiration, motivation, or curiosity. From my point of view, this has a good impact on the society.
First of all, the development of social media has transformed, to make our life easier and faster in getting in touch with the others. Moreover, it made the whole world smaller. Therefore, persons can easily follow outstanding people among others, public bloggers, musicians, sport trainers, writers, because they get inspiration and motivation and learning from them as well. For example, from my oun experience, I'm following American author, and motivational speaker Tonny Robbins on social media, because he changed my life , also teached me how to be happy in life. In other hand, human interest in others lives specially celebrities, because most of them are rich, spend a lot of money in buying expensive clothes, in additional, they travel to discover famous palaces around the world. For instance, NASSAL's family spent a fortune in Burdj Khalifa last September, they made a party for their baby, and they posted it on YouTube, as results, they reached millions followers in one day on social media. I should say that iam among the viewers who watched the vedio just by curiosity.
In my point of view, giving attention for famous people has a good impact on our life. Firstly, motivational people make theirs followers feel the sence of fulfilment, and make them see the reality, and the right way to persuade. Secondly, watching theirs journeys allow depressed people to discharge negative thoughts, and make things interesting. Moreover, give them positive energy to face theirs obstacles .
To sum up, I believe strongly that simple individuals follow wellknown people, because they are inspiring and learning from them, which has positive influence on normal people's lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32923076923 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69836046031 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643076923077 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6939892578 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158323927465 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486318784348 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368175411704 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956274517267 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192450678209 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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