Throughout history, people dream to build the perfect society while they haven't agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieve an ideal society.
In history most, people have a dream about an ideal society, whilst no one has an answer of how a perfect society should be like. However, in my perception there needs to be majorly two factors to have a better society such as social value and employment opportunity.
Firstly, social values and bonding among people is the most important aspect in order to build up of a perfect community. To elaborate, individual should build harmony and must respect each others culture and tradition without any discrimination in gender, caste and colour. India, for instance, is a diversified country where people maintain equality and respect the custom of every religion. Thus, for a perfect society one must abide with all the social norms and behaviour that can be acceptable by others.
Secondly, job opportunity is another element which is imperative to developed a good society. To elucidate, flocks require sufficient and satisfying job so as to lead a successful life in the society. To cite an example, cities like Melbourne and the United States have 100% employment rate and good financial condition. Government plays a pivotal role in improving the service opportunity of a community by providing support to the illiterate and unemployed citizens. In such a way the dream of a perfect society could be achieved.
To conclude, the aim of an ideal community can be undoubtedly attained through social value and sufficient job rates Nevertheless, these factors can be successful when every citizens and government authorities unite together to build a flawless society that can bring betterment to one's own nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1877394636 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92034461621 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7242455915 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291870534418 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10249621315 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108774414058 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17657529721 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840506457536 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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