You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers are to be preferred.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
Currently there is a contentious argument over whether senior citizens adapt better to changing workplace than employees of younger age group. I believe that senior citizens might be more beneficial in administrative roles that involve decision making. However, the major workforce of any company should prefer younger age group who not only are more zestful but are also equipped to learn more quickly. In this essay I will discuss why I agree that younger workforce is more preferred than elder population in response to changing workplace.
Beyond any qualms there are myriad of rationale reasons that prove that younger employees are more responsive of rapidly changing workplace norms than elderly population. Fresh graduates have their whole career at stake and if they do not learn the new techniques then they will be left behind in their career. Moreover, a newcomer from college who is already aware about the latest technological advancements is likely to catch up even more wistfully as compared to an employee in his sixties who has little or no idea about the latest technology. For example, when computers replaced the file work in rural banks in India it was the younger employees who shouldered the responsibility and completely transformed the workstation with their ability to respond to rapid shift in technology requiring knowledge of software.
On the contrary, some people believe that with age come experiential learning and ability to make instinctive decisions for the whole company. Therefore, these employees are better equipped to handle pressures situations and risk management. However, I believe that employees in their twenties and early thirties have comparatively less personal responsibilities such as managing a kid and other family related issues. This makes them better equipped to dedicate their time, energy and latest technological knowledge for the benefit of the organization with better physical and mental cognitive energy.
In conclusion, I believe that above fifty employees comprise the heart and soul of the company for managing the administrative positions. However, preference should be given to fresh graduates who would not only adapt but even sustain in accordance to the changing work environment.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-01-12 | ankita.hpgdc | 78 | view |
| 2021-01-12 | ankita.hpgdc | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91491449799 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9287985459 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171879161126 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583613904277 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429091188733 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999059567211 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371522146141 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.