Some people are of the opinion that women should play an equal role in police or military forces like the army. Others believe that this work is unsuitable for women.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, the role of women has significantly changed. They have participated in various sectors, such as manufacture or economy, instead of doing house chores. However, there is a debate about whether women are suited for police or military forces or not. From my point of view, females should be given an equal chance to work in these sectors.
On the one hand, it could be understandable why some object to employ women in the defense force. First and foremost, they lack the physical health required for such a strenuous job. Multiple studies point out that on average, female soldiers are weaker and have higher injury rates on battlefields than their male counterparts. Moreover, because of natural instinct, male soldiers tend to protect their female colleagues in case of life-threatening situations, which could easily end up in both their deaths. Last but not least, instead of paying more for training women to work in combat roles, the government can invest in advanced weapons which can bring a higher probability of winning.
However, I concur with the view of giving females the opportunity to participate in the police or military forces. First, they possess other attributes that can be beneficial to these sectors. To be more specific, women are likely to be more meticulous and skillful; such traits are ideal for female medics in the army. Moreover, due to their empathy and patience, female cops are more suitable than male counterparts in cases involving domestic violence or sexual harassment.
In my opinion, both arguments have their merits. However, I tend to believe that women should be given a chance to involved in defense forces as they have other traits and qualities that men do not possess.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04513888889 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71372104778 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9931105178 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243088309009 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081244095667 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063475980136 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156345225144 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632613058222 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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