Modern communication mean that it is no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people said that modern communications mean that it í no longer necessary to write letters. From my point of view, I do not completely agree with this opinion.
In fact, It’s true that people prefer using modern communications to using write letters because of many reasons. Firstly, they help us to send letter quickly just after a few minutes. We can call or use facebook, Instagram, Email, etc to send the messages. It is convenient way. Secondly, we can keep contract with our family in the long distance. Moreover, using modern devieces to communicate means that we can save more time and energy. For example, in the past , when we didn’t have modern life, people had to wait 2-3 days to received a single letter, but now online chatting or video call is more popular so we can receive a letter for 1-2 minutes.
On the other hand, writing habit cannot easily disapper because in my opinion , people still need to use handwriting for an important occasion. For example, In many big events of life such as wedding or birthday party, people still send invitaions for each other. It looks more formal than send invitations by email or other modern communication.
In conclusion, I agree that nowadays we no longer use handwriting letter uch than in the past but the letter still to be used in some important occasions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ime and energy. For example, in the past , when we didn’t have modern life, people...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ot easily disapper because in my opinion , people still need to use handwriting fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79130434783 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62969188865 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621739130435 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4274282114 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7692307692 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232278666571 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876872990026 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106497697241 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174071713877 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118703924402 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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