in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
do you think it is a positive or negative situation?
These days some people prioritize owning their own home rather than renting a house for a specific period. In my view, although there is a compelling reason to support this idea, rented-home can provide them a wide range of benefits, especially for the youngsters.
The majority who advocate the situation of off buying the necessities of life have pointed out that ownership has been a high priority issue in the last century. As a matter of fact, ancestors used to get tents to settle down near the river. So ownership has given humanity more power and adequate self-confidence for going through any situations in which they have been dealing. As a result, if the adults are not capable of purchasing a home for their children, it is reported to lead to resentment toward themselves.
Nevertheless, some benefits are advised for renting an apartment instead of buying it, one of which is is that it is claimed to be an efficient way to settle down under any circumstances. To some extent, the youngsters, who are on a tight budget, are able to rent a home without taking out mortgages at first days of their independent life. It is worth bearing in mind that the government strives hard to encourage society to share the requirements of life. For example, a lot of research has been done to figure out how car-sharing will be taken place by buying cars in 2050. Consequently, with regard to this era, ownership will not be the effective decision for a sustainable future.
To sum up, despite the adult's feeling of owning their own home, as ownership stems from ancestors, I personally believe that this is not the pragmatic strategy for the youngsters who are not capable of taking out a lot of mortgages. Moreover, the government encourages people to use the shearing techniques because it will contribute greatly to be replaced by traditional ones in near future to faster the prosperity for the next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85365853659 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87711203234 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.922300628 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250351129539 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840059311831 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720080433673 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159150436134 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712238709424 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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