Students today can access information online, so libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Thanx to the unprecedented advancement in technology, students are now able to obtain any piece of information from internet, so the libraries are no longer required. However, I do not agree with the given notion, as I believe nothing can overshadow the necessity of library and they will always be the best option, when it will come about gaining knowledge.
To commence with, there are several reasons that makes library superior over online information. The most preponderant one is that, not everyone could afford to buy a smart phone or laptop and to pay for internet connections to seek information from online resources. While, from libraries, just buy paying a small sum of money to get membership, one can borrow as many books one needs at a time. Secondly, not all the available information on internet is authentic, since anyone can post anything over there. Hence, internet is not for everyone, but only for those who can afford it and at the same time are able to check the authenticity of available information.
Additionally, there are multiple benefits of libraries. The most pivotal one is that it not only makes it available for people to access countless genre of books, but also provide them with peaceful and comfortable ambiance along with sitting facilities to facilitate their concentration and learning. Moreover, these days libraries also have a digital counter, where people can access online information without paying anything for internet or computer. Certainly, the available facilities in the library will prevent it from getting vanished.
In summary, though internet has lots of information, library is the best, comfortable and affordable place to obtain knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, in summary, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10727969349 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05785054159 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524904214559 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1949371925 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00556971700866 0.244688304435 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00238846479607 0.084324248473 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00792164155355 0.0667982634062 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00291996085565 0.151304729494 2% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0050575205581 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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