Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people.
Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
It is said that these days criminal actions is dramatically increasing globally, with an upper ratio amongst younger population. There might be several causes for this phenomenon which will be discussed, alongside with some remedies in this essay.
Increasing crime rates, without any doubt have been attributed to some defects in the governmental and social level. The first and most important one could be the high rate of juvenile unemployment, which may lead to propagation of a spectrum of crime including robbery, pocket picking and even murder. Take a young poor youth as an example; they sometimes have no choice other than committing such criminal actions. Moreover, showing savage films in public media such as TV and cinemas could encourage the audiences toward improper behaviour due to normalization of violence. Imitating actors of these movies as a roll model could simply make a perpetrator from a naïve innocent person. Finally, lack of effective supervision on web space can be inviting for those who want to commit an elaborated, masterminded crime. Internet hacker who might steal million dollars from unaware ones, can be mentioned here as a good example.
Turning to the probable solutions, these petrifying rates of crimes could be ameliorated by some effective measures. If authorities had provided ample job opportunities for everyone, specially youngsters; the number of criminals cold be controlled much more easily. Furthermore, there must be a limitation on public exhibition of films which have violent contents. By restricting production as well as publicising these kind of movies, misbehaviors can be taken under control. Finally, it could be a good idea to boost surveillance over the Internet, especially social media, provided that this kind of monitoring has no interference with personal freedoms.
At the end it is logical to be said, despite of growing crime ratio all over the world, still some sparks of hope could be seen to master this situation through governmental and public efforts.
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Suggestion: a million
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hrough governmental and public efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34579439252 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93435454952 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654205607477 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9899242339 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233608482002 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764301342273 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629131395623 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153492021237 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227455475334 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.