The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between mother and father. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Both parents are obliged to look after their children and they should equally hold accountable for upbringing their kids. I agree to given statement as a child require attention from both parents and in case of dual income family it will not be easy for one parent to provide nourishment to kid.
The first point to consider is that children require constant attention from both parents. When it comes to brig up their offsprings, it should not be gender base rule. The needs of a kids are separate from both of his parents. The mother is more emotionally attached to kids and in most of the households, father is the one who fulfil their financial needs. In their adolescence, proper attention should be paid towards them which is feasible if both parents hold themselves accountable.
Furthermore, these days most of the families are dual income, both partners being working need coordination from one another to take care of their offsprings. The whole idea about working is to provide better future to kids and if they lack in parenthood, all the money earned will go in vain. Both parents must provide guidance to kids with their studies and be emotionally available for them. It has been observed that in most of the households where focus is just on earning money, parents fail in nurture of their kid and in future regret about that.
To conclude, parental involvement in raising a child plays pivotal role as the kids are emotionally attached to both parents and need both father and mother to guide them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a kid' or simply 'kids'?
Suggestion: a kid; kids
...d not be gender base rule. The needs of a kids are separate from both of his parents. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81992337165 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55619595967 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536398467433 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7711670049 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10571958192 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470388073779 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370967062324 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748047985948 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038039914547 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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