many countries import a large amount of foods from other parts of the world.
to what extent it is positive or negative?
Nowadays, the fundamental needs of human are in the position of increasing.while many countries are rely on the other parts of world to meet the daily requirements of individuals such as foods. in my opinion, this trend could affect both negative and positive way that I will mention on below.
Alongside an increasing damand of human, governments are bound to import the foods from other countries.firstly, in negative aspect, this trend affects on the economy of government as importing demanded products could be expansive as well as high cost in transportation of them that really makes pressure on government financial.In addition,countinue reliance over other countries to import the requirments bring less maturity which could lead to bring problems when the host country of supply would not able to product the massive amount of importable products. For example, Nepal is fully rely on with India for the vagetiable items, this trade remained suspanded due to the corona virus while Nepal was surviving underpriviledge life.
on the other hand, positive impact also bring on societies and countries. Firstly, countries could be able to make a strong alliance between each other as regular mutual trade. Beside,host countries can share their ides that could be a massive assistance for underdeveloping country as well as it would be new strides for upcoming era that help to be mature themslves.
In conclusion, rising demand of people as well as a massive import of foods from other countries brings both negative and positive impacts that I mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, really, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17131474104 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97004937912 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 251.0 20.2975951904 1237% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1298.0 106.682146367 1217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 251.0 20.7667163134 1209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 145.0 7.06120827912 2053% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321921430546 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.321921430546 0.084324248473 382% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215617802516 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675742216698 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 128.4 13.0946893788 981% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -183.29 50.2224549098 -365% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 101.2 11.3001002004 896% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.19 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.49 8.58950901804 239% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.4 10.1190380762 1012% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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