Nowadays, creations of technology such as robots are using rapidly all over the world. What do you think does these development have more advantage or disadvantage ?
It is true that inventions of modern technology such as robots have contributed to make easy and solve the daily disruptions of people. In my view, rising tendency of people in such invention can have both negative and positive consequence.
There are two key drawbacks of human-based creation from the prospective of individuals and economy. The impact over the individuals is that people are losing their opportunities, rights and social interaction; meaning that numerous use of robots has replaced man-power resulting more difficulties and disruptions to earn a living. For example, many people, even from hotel waiters to scientists, have lost their jobs due to the invention of variety of robots. Likewise, human rights and interaction are declining because of door-to door amenities provided by man-made creations. From the economy prospective, impact is that a huge sum of money and natural raw sources are being used to develop this creation. Creating devices that works as a human being is not easy, in this sense that massive budget, researches and observations ,and different natural properties have to be applied to achieve it that can be economical burden.
On the other hand, disadvantages mentioned above can be taken as opposite angle. Firstly, rather than losing opportunities, people can be saved form being injured. This is because, daily disruptions, which might be more horrific and harmful doing in the direct involvement of individual such as from manufacturing of small devices to observing of planets, can be completed through the help of technology inventions. In addition, it has far more benefits in aspect of economy. People have achieved great breakthrough though it costs a huge charge on its creation. To support the ideas, for example, the owner of restaurant should not pay big salary for employee if he use robotic waiter ; in this sense any organisation can earn a large money by robots.
In conclusion, rising use of technology’s creations have contributed in both negative and positive measures that I mentioned above
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| 2021-04-18 | anoj adhikari | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28963414634 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00736800883 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1753637699 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175928051708 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603734170408 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423572388411 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121049250753 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152001437391 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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