Task 1: The maps show art gallery in Australia in 1950 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the changes which took place in art gallery in Australia between 1950 and now.
It can clearly be seen that art gallery in Australia transformed significantly during the period shown, with the new construction of Asian art and children art school.
In 1950, the courtyard was located in the north of art gallery and in the middle of gallery, there was a sculpture. On the left hand side of the picture, there was a temporary exhibition between a cafe and bookshop. Similarly, the middle European Art was sited between a early European art and Australia art. Finally, there was a entrance in the south of the sculpture.
Now, the courtyard has been converted into three places such as a children art school, a Australia aboriginal art and Australia art. On the west of art gallery, the cafe has been divided into a small cafe room and a toilet. The temporary exhibition, the bookshop, the sculpture and the entrance remain unchanged. Meanwhile, the Australian art has been transformed into a Asia art. Finally, the early European art and middle European art have been stayed in the same place
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e middle European Art was sited between a early European art and Australia art. F...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t and Australia art. Finally, there was a entrance in the south of the sculpture....
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e places such as a children art school, a Australia aboriginal art and Australia ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ustralian art has been transformed into a Asia art. Finally, the early European a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, similarly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71830259079 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457894736842 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3478977313 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6363636364 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204608960232 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908658020483 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794169329167 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16011315157 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592430986648 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.