The growing number of overweighted people putting strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum to what extent do you agree or disagree?
t is a common belieif that health is extremely important for human being with proper health he would be able to earn an make him socialise with others, but growing number of overweighted people are exerting tremendous pressure on healthcare system. In order to put the issue of obesity at end, I completely believe that sports should be encouraged at every level in school curriculum because it is one of the right ways of tackling weight problems.
Moreover, introducing more and more is sports related activities in school will tend to make students to create their interest in this field, which make them fit and sound. Besides, if they become more inclined towards sports they could also make their family members to play sports which eventually help their health become sound and balanced.
Altough, the easy access of junk food created a lot of troubles for new generation because their personality is more inclined towards it which is causing some serious health related problems. However, all these can be easily handled if we encourage children to do exercises and healthy activities.
More preferable, health is lost everything is lost so we have to do some exercises such as cardiovascular or yoga to maintain proper immune system and health and these issue also help in reducing overweight issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05069124424 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64216500445 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0634153674 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.571428571 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200001814906 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817847674288 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743035775632 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110141624741 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678041990505 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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