It is believe that advertising can say a lot about a country.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In the 21 century advertisement content developed throughout the world. Where in, region related adverts is say much more about that place but do all that information is not right. I partially believe that advertisement is not sufficient for most details of country however it is give some basic data of the country. The following paragraph discuss my point of view and lead to logical conclusion.
On the one hand, commercial advertisement is connected with regional data for increase to promote a items/products. They will show some traditional cloths, culture as well as history, so all human being is attracted toward by their culture and cloths. To exemplify, Gujarat tourism is travelling company which shows some ancient historical place such as Ranki-Lake ,Maharaja palace extra.
On the other hand, some adverts company marketing their products with interfering with country culture data and showing fake ,hence the audience is get wrong information of that area. For example, the Aditya Birla Cements company marketing their products like their product is more stronger and reliable than ancient marble and all that advertising is done by video editing software with energetic music to increase attention of people. So it may not gives an actual information of nation.
To conclude, advertisement is gives some of information related to country yet all of this not giving right data.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32882882883 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85167867412 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617117117117 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0730044529 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.545454545 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147319222563 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554991147004 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473517354263 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963547134261 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447992625824 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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