Leadership has always been playing an indispensable part in today's society - the ability to make tough decisions or solve problems... However, therefore it has become a controversial issue for many people which makes lots of divided opinions on it. Some believe that leadership was gifted to some individuals, which makes them naturally a good leader; while the others suppose that leadership can be achieved through passion and effort. Both points of view will be analyzed further in the following essay.
Leadership has always been playing an indispensable part in today's society - the ability to make tough decisions or solve problems... However, therefore it has become a controversial issue for many people which makes lots of divided opinions on it. Some believe that leadership was gifted to some individuals, which makes them naturally a good leader; while the others suppose that leadership can be achieved through passion and effort. Both points of view will be analyzed further in the following essay.
To begin with, it is understandable that some individuals actually possess the qualities of a good leader naturally. It could be either confidently giving opinions, an ability to express their views clearly or to lead a group of people - which makes them more outstanding than others. For instance, in elementary schools, an environment without any knowledge of skills about how to be a leader, some students still have the ability to lead - which expressed their gift as being natural-born leaders at a very young age. Hence, that’s why it is undeniable that leadership can also be a blessing gift.
On the other hand, apart from the fact that leadership can be seen as a natural talent, some suppose that it can also be achieved by training and experiencing. Through the hardship of the environment, with passion and effort, they also change people’s behaviors. To exemplify, as a group of teenagers who join programs for global youth leaders, they will have a chance to present their ideas and cooperate with world leaders, which inspires them to be a good leader.
In conclusion, I personally believe that leadership can be considered in both ways. Although it was gifted to a number of people in this world, nevertheless it doesn’t mean that leadership can’t be gained through the path of hardship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...To begin with, it is understandable that some individuals actually possess the qu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13087248322 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88866945315 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6307181271 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315752142703 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127753521681 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168651270717 0.0667982634062 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21154604545 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222438179408 0.056905535591 391% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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