Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
The statement seems to assume all scandals are similar in nature.Clearly, they are not.I believe most scandals can help us focus on the problems that need to be dealt with, but in the case of scandals that are private, such as extramarital affairs among pop stars and politicians, they will only distract people’s attention from important issue.
As people now have less time to spend on public issue, important public issues may be unnoticed by most people until a scandal erupts.Indeed, scandals make people focus on big issue, while the big issue is hard to know.For example, The new coronavirus outbreak is continuing to grow.Until recently, we started to realized that the border control did not work.Moreover, the minister of civil health is trying to conceal the facts.The scandal make people notice that the emergency system of the COVID-19 is weak and flawed.In this case, scandal can do the right job, and raise the concern of the deadly virus.
Some may argue that scandal reduce government credibility and they support not to reveal any kind of scandals.However, government should not cover up facts and cover up crimes.Sometimes people have blind trust in the government and large corporations.Without scandals, this blind trust may remain intact for years.For example, a large Taiwanese fast-food manufacturing company ,”Ding-Xing”, save costs by using ingredients that are not edible and potentially harmful to human health.After scandals erupted, people boycotted Ding-Xing products, causing the stock price to drop significantly .The scandals have raised awareness of food safety among customers.
However, the scandals can use to mislead the public.Because of the mass media is well developed. Scandals can be wide spreader and even exaggerated.People are easily attracted by celebrities’ sexual scandal.What’s worse, some candidates may attack to gain more votes.In the realm of entertainment, many actors or actress made scandals of themselves, and let themselves become the headline of newspapers and websites. The more frequent they are talked about by public, the more famous they become. It is hard to figure out what is the truth of the scandals, and even more this kind of scandal is bad for the society.We may surround by negative energy.
To conclude, scandals are mostly helpful, but scandals that are not related to public issues should not be sensationalized and exaggerated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41424802111 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22425713282 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575197889182 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 23.0359550562 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.712862271 60.3974514979 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.5 118.986275619 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.375 23.4991977007 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.21951772744 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17591996918 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899086838953 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456163694429 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105925949957 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458730340764 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 14.1392134831 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 48.8420337079 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.1743820225 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.2143820225 185% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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