in spite of advantages in-made in agriculture many people around the world still hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
These days, the need for more food has considerebly increased as compared to previous generations. The main reasons for this is the heavily growing population. what i mean by this is that, as there are lakhs of newborns being born every single day all around the world, the demand for grains, fruits, vegetables etc. has gone up. in this essay we will discuss about the the problems and solutions regarding the availablity of eatables to everyone even after considerable growth in agricultural practices.
Firstly, as we know the rich people aquire the most amount of food from the supermarkets or shops. what i want to say by this is that most individuals are deprived of food beause of the wealthy humans that exist. For example, a rich man will buy stocks worth months because he is lazy to come back to the store. The solution to this lies in making or educating some people of society in regards to the scarcity of food.
secondly, we can say that artificial demand for food has increased. this means that the people in the agricultural line, our continuosly or frequently variying the prices of food items. The reason for this is that goverments hiking the taxes and prices of petroleum products for transportation. hence not many can afford to pay higher prices for aquaring food. The solution to this lies in the country waving of taxes or providing subsidy to the farmers.
thirdly, the quality of agricultural products have decreased. hence, many people dont prefer buying them due to health issues in the present or future. the solution is that produiction should be increased as well as quality should be maintained.
To conclude, we can say that the food can only be available to everyone only if, the problem of extra storage and increased tax can be reduced and better technologies or processes can be worked on to avoid the scarcity of food or agricultural products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, i mean, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87306501548 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71689070043 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538699690402 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4471670827 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267797214418 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768882503952 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526103276328 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144738523007 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382507476053 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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