Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Protecting the environment is increasingly becoming a global necessity. While I agree that politicians take responsibility for this subject, I disagree with the statement that individuals play a minor role in this topic.
To begin with, there are some reasons why it is necessary to ask the administrations to solve the environmental issue. Firstly, due to the role of a leader in a certain country, these officials could enact environment-related regulations which are valid to the whole community. Because of this action, citizens would be informed about the importance of protecting their environment in an official way. By contrast, an individual or a private organization would find it difficult to disseminate environmental messages and popularize them. Secondly, politicians are people who represent residents in a particular area to solve problems in relation to the benefits for society and individuals. Therefore, these representatives could have a broad vision to address issues properly and mitigate them in an appropriate way.
However, it would be mistaken to claim that the responsibility of individuals is little or not important. The initial point is that a community is established and built up by every single individual, which could reflect the picture of a town. This means that only a person dumps household waste in an improper place, the cleanliness of the whole area would be influenced adversely by this individual. Nevertheless, if everyone together has a good consciousness of environmental protection, people could live in a clean and green city or town. For example, my niece, herself, runs a campaign in her school to encourage schoolmates to join a hand in collecting trash on the local beach every weekend, which helps to contribute to the cleanliness of her area.
In conclusion, although the government is mainly accountable for these emergency issues, I am of the opinion that individuals also play a vitally important role in protecting the globe from pollutants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...dress issues properly and mitigate them in an appropriate way. However, it would be mistaken to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3873015873 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39138564581 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6686943415 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.214285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148291555568 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519083437904 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615331062987 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101354466213 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524237719047 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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