Most of the world’s problem is caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree?
It is assumed that the majority of the universal problem is attributed to over-populated circumstances. From my perspective, I am truly in agreement with this statement.
It is tangible that the proliferation of population has been an overwhelming issue worldwide as it provokes a host of troubles. Initially, the teeming population exaggerates environmental problems such as the exhaustion of natural resources and pollution. This is derived from the fact that the consumption of resources is at a far faster rate than the planet’s speed of generating them. Another significant challenge is that the more individuals living on Earth, the more waste they produce and the more polluted the environment becomes. For instance, millions of gallons of untreated human excrement flow into the river every day, which makes the water contaminated.
Besides, global warming is one of the most head-aching threats caused by overpopulation. Population growth has accelerated the proportion of greenhouse gases emission and the rate of deforestation, which leads to global warming by creating a greenhouse effect in the atmosphere. Global warming is among the key factors to some devastating disasters such as extreme droughts, rising sea levels, and severe storms which will affect all individuals especially the underprivileged and the economically marginalized. To be more precise, as global warming makes the glacier ice melt, the sea level rise and put coastal lands at significant risk of destructive erosion and permanent disappearance.
In conclusion, I totally believe that overpopulation is the greatest contributor to the world’s problems as it worsens environmental challenges and leads to global warming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enges and leads to global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69379844961 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42415701611 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4899333183 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.416666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0852474278918 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327161795859 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522322982489 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634714277119 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543668799045 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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