It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Researchers and travelers have found a way to visit unaffected south pole environment. There are number of cons and pros by visiting such places frequently. This essay will be throwing a light upon benefits and disadvantages for the same.
The primary disadvantage of visiting south pole is, people may pollute the environment, as there is human propensity to litter the surroundings. Secondly, visitors may face harsh weather condition on such environments as temperature can be high or low which can jeopardize the life of travelers to remote areas. Apart from that, Tourists may disturb the habitats such as animal species which can contribute in our environment to balance things For example, visitors can poach down the rare species of animals on such places where there is no appropriate monitoring.
On the contrary, when it comes to the advantages of visiting south pole or remote environment, researchers can study well about any species living on south pole, For example, recently scientist discovered a life beneath the earth thousand of miles down in Antarctica. Moreover, Scientist can study about our environment's weather condition and can predict the future season. In addition, they can theorize global warming effects on our planet, as our planet getting warmer and warmer. Apart from that, tourist can also gain knowledge about habitats livings.
In conclusion, It is amazing to know that scientist and tourist are able to reach such remote places, however, Government ought to take some steps to protect environments by implementing strict rules for the contravention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ist discovered a life beneath the earth thousand of miles down in Antarctica. Moreover, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3625498008 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92409652214 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3606999622 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.363636364 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284400147931 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102220822538 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572600400148 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174581267006 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140436760916 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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