Discuss the pros and cons of using public transport
It is a fact that public transport is a trend of countries in the world today, but it also has advantages and disadvantages follows
It is clear that using public transport would create several advantages. One evident strength is that it would protect the atmosphere. In other words, reduce toxic gas caused by gasoline to the environment. Another reason is that it would help save travel costs because public transport is very cheap, only 7000-10000 VND for a short distance in the city and from 100000-30000 for trips to the suburbs. Last but not least help reduce traffic congestion in the city, you also know that during peak hours, the traffic is extremely crowded, causing traffic jams, so we can take the subway or bus to reduce traffic jam
However, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. First, you have to accept that it will take some time to wait for the car to arrive, It means that it will take you from 5 minutes to 20 minutes to wait for your bus to arrive. Second, you may lose things or have sensitive parts of your body secretly photographed, In particular, female friends because perverts and thieves will take advantage when we are not paying attention or when the car is full of people, out of sight to do those things. Finally, maybe you have to stand the whole way, during rush hour, many students leave school, old grandparents go to the market or visit their children and grandchildren, employees return home from work, if you are a young person, giving up your seat for the elderly and women Pregnancy, children, people with disabilities are natural.
In conclusion, there are plus points to public transport. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of we are careful when using public transport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...0000 for trips to the suburbs. Last but not least help reduce traffic congestion in the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, in particular, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83443708609 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61355415511 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.0661469393 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144095468886 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809490211751 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108605271516 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137865967004 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104249343512 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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