Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a gap year, before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons. For others this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Many young citizens in the modern society are now opt for a gap year before getting serious with any business or continuing pursuit higher academic. It is true that within this one-year people could learn various thing and precious experiences. However, other believes this trend is costly and it is not worthy to invest time into. Personally, I incline to the former opinion because this trend could provide people essential skills and knowledge in life.
This is trend gives travelers chances to learn foreign languages as well as befriend with people from different cultures. As they have to stay and use languages, which is not mother tongue, on daily basis, this could improve the learning process much faster. In addition, making friends at the base country also help create a wide social net which might be useful for later business. For example, if the person taking a gap year end up being a businessman, these new international relationships could be beneficial in his or her career path. However, as well as the flight and accommodation fee, the cost spent on basis need are also extremely expensive if people do not have a stable income.
another reason why gap year is popular is because travel broaden one’s mind. By exposing to different cultures, the travelers could enrich their knowledge, while at the same time reflect the differences between the home country and other. This provides numerous opportunities to contemplate and recognize personal interest, dreams or goals and so on, especially when the young generation usually uncertain about their future. However, to those who already decide what career to follow, this is deemed as time wasting. A doctor degree normally takes up to six or eight years to achieved, which is a long time, thus the idea of taking a gap year might be unnecessary.
In conclusion, whilst it could be costly and time consuming, the merits of this idea is significant. Therefore, I highly recommend young people taking one year break if it is possible to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'opted'.
Suggestion: opted
... citizens in the modern society are now opt for a gap year before getting serious w...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
... people do not have a stable income. another reason why gap year is popular is becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02380952381 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64793993216 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0098270714 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267847095572 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841463130816 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362590226127 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162874278337 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367641719698 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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