The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no denying that women these days are getting more respectful and higher positions in society. However, there are still existing prejudices against people who have a wealthy social status but have female gender. Therefore, I agree with this given topic.
To begin with, in the past, women were always seen as pretty things and tools serving men. In addition, weakness and fragile were symbols of women in old days. For instance, when the war started, women were the ones to stay at home to take care of children and protect them while men participated in fighting with enemies as soldiers. As a result, the men got respect from everyone due to the fact that they contributed to protecting their national territories while women did not. However, these days when society started to develop, women are allowed to go to work and inherit a good education like men. As we can see, nowadays it is not difficult to find a woman working for the government or a female CEO of a big company.
Yet, still many men in the world are being contemptuous of women. The main reason for this phenomenon normally comes from their families. For the child who lives with a dad who usually uses violence against their moms, there will be a great chance of the kid being disrespectful to women later in life. Moreover, in some developing countries, women are suffering from the injustice of genders. For example, in India, there has been a woman killed by her husband because she chose to go to work instead of staying at home taking care of her family.
In conclusion, even though feminist has existed for a long time, a lot of women in the world are still seeking SOS after being violated by their families or being raped just because they are wearing clothes they like. Hence, all children should be taught to be respectful to others no matter what gender they are.
- The tables below show people s reasons for giving up smoking and when they intend to give up summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 73
- Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet While the Internet is convenient it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted How far do you agree with this statement 73
- The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Investment in local amenities such as leisure centers is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit To what extent do you agree or disagree What other measures do you think might be effective 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70336391437 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4176473393 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2212875065 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123317943105 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427104513209 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328400395603 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774640670943 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370327273775 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.