In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Now-a-days, people tend to own a house to lead their life peacefully by avoiding the hassle in renting a house every now and then. Possessing a house by own’s name not only develop a strong social status but also provide a permanent shelter for their life long. Hence, I am of the opinion that residing in a bought house is a positive situation for both, themselves and the society.
Generally, peoples are bound to the society and always seeking for a high position. This position is often achieve with a home after the name. City dwellers in a developing country, for example, always run to buy a house rather than living on a house with monthly fare to gain a social value. Additionally, the dwellers most of the time find it difficult to rent a house due to high demand of the house owner which also force people to have an own house near their working place. This also gives them a permanent address for their upcoming generation.
This trend , in my opinion is a positive situation for all classes since house rent is an extra burden for the flag bearer of the family which can easily be added in a saving account if someone own a house by thyself. A recent study published at the “The Times” newspaper reported that in USA, house owning rate has been increased to 52% which ultimately raise their bank fund upto 83% from last decade. Moreover, having a house, give a satisfaction to all the members that help them to reach their dream without any additional stress of losing the shelter as the owner of the rent house might give a short notice to leave the house. So, the trend of owning a home is a positive development.
Home is the most important basic need of people. Therefore, they always want to have their own house and decorate the house as their wills rather than dominated by a owner in a rent house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
... avoiding the hassle in renting a house every now and then. Possessing a house by own’s name not o...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r their upcoming generation. This trend , in my opinion is a positive situation f...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: DT_DT[3]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or '“The' is left.
Suggestion: the; “The
...by thyself. A recent study published at the “The Times” newspaper reported that in USA, ...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...as their wills rather than dominated by a owner in a rent house.
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54242424242 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4276498914 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548484848485 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.217396937 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20982601536 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891562326774 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457581348886 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140400713799 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246979570641 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.