In most of the societies the role of mother and father differs What are the causes of this difference What will be the parental roles in future

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In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future?

Submitted by eyraen on Tue, 01/11/2022 - 06:55

the parental role of father and mother of many societies are varying from each other. this essay explains the reasons for these changes and elaborates on the possible roles of both parents in the coming future.

there are a number of reasons for this kind of variation. the first cause is cultural diversity such as, there are some traditional trends in the parenting of father and mother. for instance, in Indian culture, the male prominence would be higher than some other western families. therefore father rules out the family and his role would be higher than the female in India. The second cause would be the educational or job oriented which includes most of the working parents changing their roles in parenting according to the availability of time and social status. these changes would differ from various societies such as both of them plays the role of both parents related to the situations.

in the future there would be tremendous differences would be seen in parenting due the globalization and industrialization. to begin with, the overwhelming majority of both parents would be working either in the public or private sector. therefore they could not argue to staying in one position would be controversial. employments and earning money would differentiate the role of parents because gender prominence would be mitigated and gender-neutral governance might
be seen in the coming future. likewise, single parenting also escalates even in this time, therefore these changes may lead to further disparity in the role of father and mother in upcoming years too.

to sum up, although there are dissimilarities among the role of father and mother in different communities. there would be a lot of changes would be occurred in the role of parenting in forthcoming years as a whole.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, likewise, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13559322034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86063135003 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498305084746 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2039899581 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370037271031 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141688336962 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712446185225 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238742707819 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542750612912 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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...f both parents in the coming future. there are a number of reasons for this kind o...
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...h parents related to the situations. in the future there would be tremendous di...
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...he globalization and industrialization. to begin with, the overwhelming majority o...
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...either in the public or private sector. therefore they could not argue to staying in one ...
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Suggestion: therefore,
...either in the public or private sector. therefore they could not argue to staying in one ...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Employments
...in one position would be controversial. employments and earning money would differentiate t...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ated and gender-neutral governance might be seen in the coming future. likewise, ...
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Line 6, column 31, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Likewise
...e might be seen in the coming future. likewise, single parenting also escalates even i...
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Suggestion: To
...er and mother in upcoming years too. to sum up, although there are dissimilarit...
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...er and mother in different communities. there would be a lot of changes would be occu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, likewise, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13559322034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86063135003 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498305084746 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2039899581 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370037271031 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141688336962 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712446185225 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238742707819 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542750612912 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.