Some people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in the cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
People have divergent views as to whether healthy well-being can be gained in rural areas or metropolises. This essay aims to analyze both sides of this argument and then I will give my own perspective which is building a healthy lifestyle in the countryside.
On the one hand, one of the major benefits which is derived from living in the city is the instant and innovative healthcare system. Indeed, city citizens can easily be exposed to the nationally best hospitals with advanced equipment and other health services since most of them are located in the city where it appears to have the constant advancement in technology. For instance, thanks to a wide use of the Internet in urban areas, people can now receive a check-up from a doctor by their phones without leaving home. Consequently, almost every health-associated problem can be tackled quickly in the city.
On the other hand, a population-free environment can be one of the discernible advantages of countryside life. In fact, rural areas inhabitants have less chance of witnessing many environmental catastrophes compared to those living in the city due to their eco-friendly agricultural act. As a result, people living there do not have to face numerous health problems, especially those which are associated with populations like in urban areas. For example, a survey by an environmental company has shown that urban citizens are reportedly more likely to have lung cancer than those in the countryside.
In conclusion, I believe both sides have their own merits. On balance, it is my opinion that living in the countryside is more beneficial in terms of health. This is because it is my firm belief that the fresh atmosphere is undoubtedly more important to have overall good health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
People have divergent views as to whether healthy well-being can be gained in rur...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'nationally the best'.
Suggestion: nationally the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10726643599 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03497490342 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0212552393 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280637379054 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902653692484 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048121991983 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158069177025 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353750201918 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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