Task 2: The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve the crime. Do you agree or disagree?
Some argue that technological advancement has allowed our civilizations to enjoy an absolute degree of security and welfare as it helps to reduce crime rates compared to the old days. I agree with this opinion owning to the endless advantages associated with technology.
A century ago, people suffered daily from either minor delinquencies or high-profile crimes due to the primitive technology available to ensure public safety. Whenever a particular criminal case happened, a victim had little choice but to report the event to the local officers without guaranteeing future protection. They had to put up with an unsolvable crime due to a lack of evidence, as the security system in the old days were lack of the practicability and validity to track offenders who often successfully got off the hook from the police. For example, a high-profile case occurred in the US during the fall of 2000, in which more than dozens of people were mysteriously shot dead by an unknown sniper in Washington DC. Only seven years later was the criminal arrested by the FBI agents on account of a lack of evidence and glues to track him down, causing public insecurity and vulnerability at the time.
Nowadays, it is apparently evident that the development of technology provides a larger degree of social security for the entire populace. One example of technological advancement that helps solve crimes is data mapping providing police departments with a clear geographical look at the crime types and the crime rates that happen in a particular area. Drug rings and traffickers are typical fundamental cases of how data mapping can be helpful to the police. It also helps the police identify problems in a community and allows them to strategize effectively to help tackle crime. In addition, with the development of social media, the public now can enjoy a much more degree of human rights as they can instantly report and draw public attention to crime and unjustified lawbreaking cases that bystanders on social media can act as witnesses to help solve crimes. Technology also strengthens the efficiency of street surveillance, which plays a crucial role in deterring ex-convicts or would-be offenders as they are vigilant to numerous cameras around them.
In conclusion, it is evident that with technological advancement, society is increasingly becoming more secure than at any other time in human history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, look, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17692307692 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00600866598 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6366902644 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.214285714 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22159506635 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697028112131 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691006625954 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118954674266 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686018377746 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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