Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
One century ago, Who can believe that the technology will take these proportion from peoples life. Mostly all people can take a benefit from the technology. So there are huge fans to the technology and there are fanatic against it.
Actually, the technology incursion in every day use of the plant. The benefits of the technology are so multiplex ;It makes every thing faster, easier and more comfortable. Like in the communication between the others, there is watsapp, manger and Gmail. In the education, there is printers, computers and projectors. To figure out how much the technology helps in our live, just look at any industry ; one machine can work as much as 100 man.
With all of these pros there are some cons took this generation to another harmful level. It makes people lazier, overmaster and so lonely. People no longer make calls with each other as the past, they don’t longer free days and vacations. Additionally, there is a new Diseases and problems because of technology, like shortage in various and weakness in focus.
The technology is a new weapon has to edges. It could be so helpful and make the live easier or demolish it. In my opinion I used to use the social media so much last years, but I controlled myself and I feel better now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fanatics'?
Suggestion: fanatics
...ge fans to the technology and there are fanatic against it. Actually, the technology i...
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Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...it. Actually, the technology incursion in every day use of the plant. The benefits of the t...
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Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are printers'?
Suggestion: there are printers
...pp, manger and Gmail. In the education, there is printers, computers and projectors. To figure ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, as to, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73755656109 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58398811184 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62443438914 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4413486714 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162170506483 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504059858021 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315765461934 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09308567318 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114747390258 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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