Write about the following topic:
Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, it is believe by some that learning with a team of students in a classroom
On the one hand , learning online brings some benefits for students .
Firstly , learning online help students save time. this is because they don not have to spend time to go to school . students only need to open their computer and they can study . Secondly , students will not be interupted when they study at home. This is because they don not meet their friend and they can not talk to each others. Additionally , They also lost time to play with each others .
On the other hand , i am convinced that studying in a classroom is better.
The first reason is i believe the quality of studying is higher when students come to school.When students meet teachers and listen lessons direct , the knowledge is more receptive and easy to understand . Additionally , students can ask their teachers when they have problem while learning online is very hard for students to ask their teachers. The second reason is i think students meet their friends can improve the relationships betweet each student, this is because they can talk to each others and share their story while they can not do it if they sudy online.
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support studying in a classroom , i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79079497908 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52507616195 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497907949791 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8862783301 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157431000864 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715123215658 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473307643718 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977078253954 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284580260586 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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