Some people believe that certain old buildings should be preserved more than others. What types of old buildings should be preserved? Do you think the advantages of preserving old buildings outweigh the disadvantages?
It is thought by some people that the certain old contruction should be preserved more than others. There are some old buildings which it includes the traditional of the nation that should be protected. While I believe protected the old building can save the traditional of the nation and it can attractive more visitors to increase the budget in tourism, the nation also need to build new contruction to develop their nation.
There are many old contruction have been built for a long time and it be preserved from the local residents to remined for the local people about their traditional. Some old buildings can present the events that happen in the past and it use for tourism nowaday. It is increase the number of visitors to visits. For example, in Viet Nam, there was a place stood in Cu Chi province that was use in the war between France and Viet Nam, that placed took a lots traveller to come and see the contruction under the ground.
However, in the modern days which it influence by the speech of development in world-wide. As a result, some countries have to build a new building to run with the trends from other nation. While in some countries do not have a place for the local people to lives, while preserved old building take a lot of spacious. Take a case in Singapore, the government have been detroy some old building to contruct a place for their people to living.
In conclusion, I believe that preserved old building can save the nation tradition and widespeared the budget of tourism, while in a small country it take a lot of space that decreased the place for the local people to living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65277777778 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56639270724 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430555555556 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3315762773 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39106331613 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173918697554 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132911632185 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262958005783 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103200111526 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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