Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, in the advent world of information and technology, advertisements have become a ubiquitous part of our daily life. Undoubtedly, this has several merits and downsides simultaneously.
On the one hand, there are two main benefits that advertising provides to the customer. To begin with, the popularity of advertising campaigns in terms of different products, whether via traditional methods of advertising such as using banners and printed newspapers or via television commercials and social networking sites, can enhance the variety of choices for buyers, which means they are more likely to approach, compare, and select their appropriate products. As a result, this improves their satisfaction and eventually contributes to raising their living standards. Furthermore, there are numerous advertisements that publish great content and marketing plans to attract potential customers. For example, the financial report of Vinfast - a well-known Vietnamese automobile brand - in 2022 shows that their newly branched product raised brand awareness by 10 percent and favorability by 8 percent. This not only attracts a large number of brand-loyal customers but also creates a skyrocket in Vinfast’s profit. This shows the significant role of advertising not only with the customer but also with the entrepreneur.
On the other hand, the widespread of advertisements brings negative influences that cannot be ignored. First, more and more advertisements are created for commercial purposes regardless of their quantity and quality. This means the producer can trick their customers to buy poor-quality products which badly affects their satisfaction with the stuff. Besides, it can be seen that internet users are overwhelmed by the colossal number of unwanted advertising which worsens their online experience. For instance, advertising can suddenly appear while they are watching YouTube videos or playing online mobile games, which is annoying.
In conclusion, it can be seen that advertising despite the significant role it provides to the public, there are some issues about advertising that need to be tackled.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 931, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ty by 8 percent. This not only attracts a large number of brand-loyal customers but also creates ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76265822785 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15048672923 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0040374439 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17245018014 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585536577249 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665686728558 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108688079248 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354556442433 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 931, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ty by 8 percent. This not only attracts a large number of brand-loyal customers but also creates ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76265822785 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15048672923 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0040374439 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17245018014 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585536577249 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665686728558 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108688079248 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354556442433 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.