Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age Do you agree or disagree

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Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age.
Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical accident, it is inappropriate for this sport to exist in international world. From my point of view, i totally agree with this notion since boxing is not really significant for the individuals. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, boxing is seen like the most dangerous sport in the world, there are a plenty of risk injury in the boxing match, so it is not necessary for people's life in the modern age. Furthermore, this sport may lead terrible affect for the individuals when they get older. With teenagers who do not enough knowledge to distinguish right from wrong Violence action from boxing can have horrible influence to their mentality and their habit. In addition, some business take advantage from boxing match to their own profit by illegal gamble, this trend will lead bad influence to the human's life and social. To illustrate, gamble will make economic of their country reduce graduately and aslo it will make a lot of people became homeless or unemployment.
However, we can not negate that boxing do not brings any benefit to the social, boing make more job for the individuals, it help people relax, entertainment and comfortable after companies or school. For instance, watching their fovorite boxing player can take distance away from stress, relax and heal their pain. Moreover, boxing is the long history sport and have huge affect for the metality and habit of citizen.
To conclude, by my reason and agruement boxing is not too significant for our life, but on other aspect it is not easy to leave. Government need to have bright plan to help this sport safer for the boxing player.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Many people believe that boxing is a blo...
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...ing match to their own profit by illegal gamble, this trend will lead bad influen...
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...is trend will lead bad influence to the humans life and social. To illustrate, gamble ...
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...r, we can not negate that boxing do not brings any benefit to the social, boing make m...
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...for the metality and habit of citizen. To conclude, by my reason and agruement ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90068493151 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56077149823 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5270017374 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3597504978 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129768985556 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129994603956 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227749479336 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114780224314 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Many people believe that boxing is a blo...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will analyse this statement in detail. At first, boxing is seen like the most d...
^^^
Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...rthermore, this sport may lead terrible affect for the individuals when they get older. Wi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing match to their own profit by illegal gamble, this trend will lead bad influen...
^^
Line 2, column 585, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...is trend will lead bad influence to the humans life and social. To illustrate, gamble ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople became homeless or unemployment. However, we can not negate that boxing d...
^^
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'bring'?
Suggestion: bring
...r, we can not negate that boxing do not brings any benefit to the social, boing make m...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...g make more job for the individuals, it help people relax, entertainment and comfort...
^^^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...is the long history sport and have huge affect for the metality and habit of citizen. T...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the metality and habit of citizen. To conclude, by my reason and agruement ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90068493151 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56077149823 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5270017374 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3597504978 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129768985556 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129994603956 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227749479336 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114780224314 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.